If you want to commission Fen, you can always do so here! [link] Or watch Fen. Fen loves watchers. //shot- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ BUT FEN THERE'S ONLY FIVE HERE AND THEY'RE NOT EVEN BUTTERFLIES- //bricked-
Sorry for the impossibly cheesy title. QuQ"a But it was the best I could think of-
Anyway, this time the commission's for the user Louna on FA, of her impossibly awesome character, Eirana. ^^ AND I.HAD.SO.MUCHHH.FUNNN~ Especially that hair gradient...it was so much fun to do! ^^/ It's my first time doing a gradient with so many colours, so I wanted to make sure that it came out 100% perfect ^^ Okay...so I don't think I reached the 100% perfection I was aiming for ^^a But I hope it's still...something! ^^
Yes, those lightmites are based on an episode of MLP FIM. ANd I *tried* to make a nebula-ish background using my preexisting PS brushes. SO tons of smudging and blurring happened. ^^a PT SAI and Photoshop and Bamboo Pen
NOTE: ONLY THE COMMISSIONER IS ALLOWED TO REUPLOAD ON HER ACCOUNT.
Hi! what a colorful piece! now im no pro but I'll give it my best shot into helping you improve any way you can. OK this piece caught my eye because of the colors you have chosen, They all blend so well together which makes it a very attractive piece of work. The only fault i can pick is your face area. all it needs is a little more details in some areas and it would've been even better more defined All up this is very nice and i hope you get the praise you deserve and hope to see more of your work when it comes out =^_^=
What attracted my attention to this piece was the title, and I must say, the butterflies make this good but if they was some evidence of that there is a thousand butterflies it would be great.
However, the varies colors are very appealing, especially how the mist contrasts against the black night sky.
The hair and its colors are astonishing and I'm wondering how you did that. Now the tail, I wish it was a bit softer looking so it would have matched how the body looks soft. The proportions of the body look good but when I look at the hands, I'm wondering. "Are they meant to not have details or was that over looked?" and that is what I first thought when I saw the hands.
You have done a great job. The flaws are the butterflies, the lack of evidence that there are more of them, the hard looking tail, that is so close to being soft but isn't, and the hands due to a lack of detail. Overall, the positives outweigh the negatives and I give this the grade of a B.
However, the varies colors are very appealing, especially how the mist contrasts against the black night sky.
The hair and its colors are astonishing and I'm wondering how you did that. Now the tail, I wish it was a bit softer looking so it would have matched how the body looks soft. The proportions of the body look good but when I look at the hands, I'm wondering. "Are they meant to not have details or was that over looked?" and that is what I first thought when I saw the hands.
You have done a great job. The flaws are the butterflies, the lack of evidence that there are more of them, the hard looking tail, that is so close to being soft but isn't, and the hands due to a lack of detail. Overall, the positives outweigh the negatives and I give this the grade of a B.
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